Reviews Requested- Safe - It Isn't All Doom and Gloom
was a bit slapdash, probably not amazing
It isn't always doom and gloom
Sometimes, it's fun. Sometimes-
say, after Scrabble (when I've won)
and you pinch my bum
and I pin your wrists and you
grab my ribs, pulling free and I think: this
is what slap & tickle really means.
You are smiling, today.
So the sirens and tears seem so far
as their lights spill like milk, drain away.
We are stronger than them- even
as I go weak and give up the remote
and the batteries roll out and are lost
and you bite my nose for no reason
and Ixxxxxxxxxxxxxthink that we're happy.
Last edited by dollpart : 09-07-2011 at 12:27 AM.
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