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Old 20-09-2011, 05:50 AM   #1
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Contains sexual abuse - Evaporating Soul (poem)

Evaporating Soul

His piercing eyes burned an eerie red
scorching the landscape of my body.
They saw right into my guarded fears
leaving my spirit shamed and broke.

His breath was soured with evils scent
as his fangs tore through my defenses.
He must have savored my flesh and blood
for he feasted so many hours.

His fists pummeled away my last hope
branding me in shades of red and blue.
Marks of his dominance on display
serving as a trophy for his pleasure.

His claws shred through my sense of worth
leaving empty destruction to reign.
My soul dripped off his finger tips
I evaporated into nothingness.

-Jaime


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Old 20-09-2011, 06:12 AM   #2
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Wow! Every poem of yours is amazing but this one omg it's the most intense poem I have ever read. Now see I told you that you have a hidden talent. You can really write and no I'm not just saying that either. It's all true.



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Old 20-09-2011, 06:18 AM   #3
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Wow! Every poem of yours is amazing but this one omg it's the most intense poem I have ever read. Now see I told you that you have a hidden talent. You can really write and no I'm not just saying that either. It's all true.
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Old 20-09-2011, 06:22 AM   #4
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Your welcome!



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Old 20-09-2011, 09:16 AM   #5
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wow! really good poem very intense your good at writing well done sweetie.

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Old 20-09-2011, 09:13 PM   #6
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wow! really good poem very intense your good at writing well done sweetie.
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