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Old 24-08-2017, 10:41 PM   #1
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the pizza box skyscraper
finally gave way
and ants ate the left overs
like day after
sleep overs
nothing got done
its august
octobers still over a month away
from today
and some things cant run
from the late august sun
from the moment you woke up
cause days like this one
are a dozen a one
and a dime is no fun
when its raining
cause im in between moods
and the ant gobbled food
will only conclude
this un doing day
unproductive day
this non descript day
this lie through your teeth
cause lying in
is no longer sweet
as sweet as it was
when i lay back
way way back
all the way back
to today

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Old 30-08-2017, 12:57 PM   #2
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Nice poem! I like the repetition of the word 'today'.

We’ll find a way to fight it, we always have.
It's not how tragically we suffer but how miraculously we live.

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