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Old 06-11-2017, 07:46 PM   #1
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to the girl on the bus

an accidental poke in my eye at the bus stop as you look for your ticket
i dont mind
if anything honored
and i look you in the eye to reassure you
i fall for a second as i see you properly for the first time
your gorgeous
i dig your style
you seem kind
the way you look at me
I melt
we start talking
your funny
you have me genuinely laughing which i dont do as much as i should
i feel genuine
I'm bad at making eye contact
but with you i keep trying
we get on the bus and sit together
sitting beside an old couple you regularly see on this bus
you talk to them but turn around and look me in the eye
not for any reason
just for the sake of it
thats when i decide to ask you out
im scared shitless
what if my intuitions are way off
i don't wanna be that guy
ive literally just met you
but something tells me i'd be an idiot not to ask
but will i even get a chance?
your talking away to the couple and the stop i get off at is only a few minutes away
we continue throwing glances into each other
and my heart is out of control
my stop is getting closer and closer
suddenly the old woman asks us
"how long have you two been together?"
we laugh. i wonder did they sense the same thing about the way you looked at me and i think it was obvious from the way i was looking at you
"since the bus stop. we only just met tonight"
we all laugh. you have a really nice laugh
"well we will let you guys get to it"
the old woman says and her and her husband turn away and talk amongst themselves
its just me and you now
i quickly ask you your name and what you do
this is the make or break moment
you have to ask this girl out
you have to
from here on things happen so fast that its hard to remember
i remember you saying i hope we are like the couple when were old which caught me off guard but further solidified the fact that i had to make sure i got off this bus with one of us having the other ones number
my stop was approaching and i managed to rip some cardboard off a cigarette box and jot down my number
i ask you do you like movies
you say yes
i ask you to go to one with me
you say yes
my stop is the next one
i go to shake your hand
and as i do i feel your hand holding my head
i feel my hand holding yours
i realise we are kissing
i miss my stop
flustered
i run of the bus
i didnt even say goodbye
i just ran
and ran
like a madman
all the way home
asking myself did that just happen
proud of myself but also taken aback by the whole experience
is it weird to have kissed before a date?
i find it very hard to sleep and college in the morning is hard
im wrecked
but as i wake up a bit i start day dreaming
and now in the evening i find myself holding my bed and melting a bit again
thinking of how much id like to look into your eyes
to hold you
to tell you how pretty i think you are
to get to know you
it was only last night
but ive imagined so much time spent together
maybe this is mad
but i felt like there was something about you
i really did
you have my insides in a mush

i hope you call me....that really would make me happy


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Old 07-11-2017, 02:30 PM   #2
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Is this a true story? Really sweet, hope it works out.





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Old 07-11-2017, 05:47 PM   #3
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its true.its just an unedited mess of my thoughts. thanks i hope so too but if i never hear from her again it will be a great memory and confidence booster that i badly needed lol

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Old 07-11-2017, 06:29 PM   #4
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The 'mess' reads well. A nice little journey in both the sense of the bus journey and your experience! Glad you had a positive moment there.





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Old 08-11-2017, 05:46 PM   #5
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thanks i really appreciate that :) btw she texted me today

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Old 08-11-2017, 06:50 PM   #6
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