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Old 12-04-2016, 08:23 AM   #1
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Me. (Poem, possible trigger)

I feel sick,
It hurts.
My stomach,
My head.
This whirlwind,
Rushing,
Clinging,
Wanting me dead.

I crave it,
The trickle,
The feel,
The need for something,
For anything...
To just be real.

The pain,
The ache,
The splatter of red,
A breath,
Eyes closed,
A calmness in my head.

The tears,
They mix,
With the Crimson rivers that flow.
The pain,
It's back.
I'm stuck...
In a circle,
A cycle...
That will never slow.

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Old 12-04-2016, 06:06 PM   #2
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Punish me,
I need it,
I want it,
I crave it.

Hurt me so that I can breath.

I beg you.

Let me feel...
Let me feel release...
Let me feel air...

I need to escape,
Help me.
I'm drowning...

The waves of sorrow,
of guilt,
of heartache.
It's too much.

I need to feel...
Let me feel...

Hurt me.
Punish me.

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Old 12-04-2016, 06:07 PM   #3
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Sorry all... It appears when I want to hurt myself I'm writing and throwing it up in here.

Sorry guys.

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Old 12-04-2016, 07:07 PM   #4
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Just read this.

You express yourself very well, and what you're going through in your mind.
Actually, I for one am glad you posted this.

Yes, It can be triggering but also worth a read.

Keep expressing yourself as much as possible but please stay away from harming yourself for real.




- Best birthday present ever.
- Which one?
- You letting me take care of you.

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Old 12-04-2016, 09:35 PM   #5
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Thank you for your kind words.

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Old 14-04-2016, 09:43 PM   #6
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Hold my hand,
Walk me down that path,
Take it slow,
Stop and breath,
A cold whisper...
Trickles across my neck,
In this together.
You and I.
A touch of your hand,
I drown in your eyes,
One
Last
Breath.
A second of pain,
I fade in your arms.

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Old 15-04-2016, 09:44 PM   #7
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I loved this one too though the ending was a bit sad and left me with mixed feelings.

You're talented too so please write some more when you're feeling up to it.




- Best birthday present ever.
- Which one?
- You letting me take care of you.

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Old 15-04-2016, 10:43 PM   #8
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Thanks, glad you liked. X

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Old 16-04-2016, 12:19 AM   #9
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Since i'm not an English speaker i'm terrible at poetry.
But your poem made such an impact in me I felt like exploring for an
" alternative " ending.

Need to stay positive after all haha! ^_^

A Kiss.
New life fills me.
I open my eyes;
I peer into the heavens.
You are still here,
beside me.
Holding my hand.
Side by side,
together.
Forever.




- Best birthday present ever.
- Which one?
- You letting me take care of you.

Frozen Fever.


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Old 16-04-2016, 03:58 AM   #10
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Cold like the river,
And the wind in the trees.
Fragile and broken,
No direction it seems.
Impossible to love,
And easy to hate.
No future to speak of;
Just darkness,
No escape.

Liked your poems bloodsoakedangel and Maria so thought I'd contribute one.


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Old 16-04-2016, 12:28 PM   #11
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I like both of your poems too, glad its inspiring something.

It's hard to stay positive when you can't find a way out, but I know what you mean. I write what I feel, which is why I suppose there not all that positive.

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Old 16-04-2016, 03:43 PM   #12
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See BloadSoakedAngel, you inspire people! :)

And wr3ck3d, thanks for sharing your feelings with us as well in the form of a poem.




- Best birthday present ever.
- Which one?
- You letting me take care of you.

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Old 30-04-2016, 12:22 AM   #13
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I'm pretty sure there was another poem, or poems after my reply..
I must be imagining things..




- Best birthday present ever.
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- You letting me take care of you.

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Old 01-05-2016, 03:08 PM   #14
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I know, I know..

But how about some more of those excellent poems, please? :)




- Best birthday present ever.
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Old 03-05-2016, 04:10 PM   #15
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Whisky on your breath,
Dirt under your fingernails,
I tense...
I stutter...
I shrink away.
A glass in your hand,
Liquid sloshing on to the floor,
Your eyes scanning...
Looking...
Searching...
For me.
I hold my breath,
Will my heart to stop beating.
Angry words,
Barked from between your lips,
I gasp and your eyes lock on mine.
I stop...
Stop everything...
Switch off...
As a wicked smile edges your lips,
And your hands pull at the zipper on your jeans.

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