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Old 24-07-2007, 11:10 PM   #1
***Mitchy Babes***
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Death

when i was alone he was there he cleaned me up and cut my hair
he had no name so i called him dad and he held me when times were bad
and as the time came to pass he made me think of my past
he got me to love that Pain that you emptied into my brain
after this he took my friend and placed his shiny pointed end
and he told what i should do and he told all about u
after this before he left he screamed to me my name is death!!!



Out Of The Darkness And Unable To See I Get Swollowed By The World Around Me

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Old 27-07-2007, 11:30 PM   #2
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I like it- it's dark but it's cool. Well done :)





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