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Reviews Requested- Safe - poem
Struggling to make a sound,
struggling to stop falling down.
people pass without a care.
hatred constantly filling the air.
My eyes are open but I cannot see,
any of the light that shines near me.
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I think it works really well. A lot of hidden messages in there (didn't know how else to put it)
Maybe you should try adding some more on? I think you'll manage.
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If today were the last day of my life, would I want to do, what I'm about to do today?
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Sounds great you could
Really build more on this
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