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Old 10-11-2017, 10:52 AM   #21
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A pretty shitty poem but need to get things out somehow.

Synapses snap fingers
Limbs jump and follow
Say I have control
But even that sounds hollow

Nerve ends crackle
Pain signals fizz
Sit back and wonder
How did it come to this

Mind is my enemy
This I always knew
But secretly deep down
I thought I’d get through

Now every muscle,
And sinew feel foreign and strange
Is this all my doing
Or am I completely deranged?

Search for solutions
But have forgotten the map
With no sense of guidance
Looks like there is no way back



'Never forget what you are. The rest of the world will not. Wear it like armor, and it can never be used to hurt you.'

[''There is only one thing we say to death. Not today'.']

'I wish I was the monster you think I am.'


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Old 10-11-2017, 03:09 PM   #22
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Good poem. I hope writing this down has helped you. You’ve inspired me to get back into poetry.


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Old 10-11-2017, 05:17 PM   #23
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You’ve inspired me to get back into poetry.
That means a lot xxx



'Never forget what you are. The rest of the world will not. Wear it like armor, and it can never be used to hurt you.'

[''There is only one thing we say to death. Not today'.']

'I wish I was the monster you think I am.'


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Old 10-11-2017, 10:16 PM   #24
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Love it. I love the way it flows. And it says so much *hugs tight* Definitely not shitty.




The only time you will find real light is when you're searching in the dark..


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Old 11-11-2017, 06:34 AM   #25
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^ luff ooo



'Never forget what you are. The rest of the world will not. Wear it like armor, and it can never be used to hurt you.'

[''There is only one thing we say to death. Not today'.']

'I wish I was the monster you think I am.'


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Old 15-12-2017, 06:37 PM   #26
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The walls are solid there's no way out
Seperated from all you care about
Isolated, alone shivering scared
If I'd known it was coming I would have prepared.

Dignity is no longer a thing
You just wonder what the next visit will bring
You cry and you shout and pull out your hair
But there's nobody around, nobody who cares.

Finally you are let out of your cell
Which you were put in purely for being unwell
They give you conditions no asking for help
If you struggle then just blame yourself.



'Never forget what you are. The rest of the world will not. Wear it like armor, and it can never be used to hurt you.'

[''There is only one thing we say to death. Not today'.']

'I wish I was the monster you think I am.'


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Old 15-12-2017, 06:42 PM   #27
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Very thought provoking as always. I particularly like the second paragraph. I can feel your pain and fear in it.

I read it aloud too and it sounds good.





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Old 15-12-2017, 06:50 PM   #28
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That means a lot thankyou :)



'Never forget what you are. The rest of the world will not. Wear it like armor, and it can never be used to hurt you.'

[''There is only one thing we say to death. Not today'.']

'I wish I was the monster you think I am.'


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Old 11-01-2018, 09:21 AM   #29
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I paste on a smile while I weep
Have to put on one
After no sleep
Devils demons plague my mind
I look for the happy girl I left behind

What he took from me I should be over
But the truth is I never got closure
It's not an excuse not pretending it is
But I can't help but wonder what I've missed.



'Never forget what you are. The rest of the world will not. Wear it like armor, and it can never be used to hurt you.'

[''There is only one thing we say to death. Not today'.']

'I wish I was the monster you think I am.'


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Old 04-01-2019, 07:01 PM   #30
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*graphic SH trigger*

Just so nobody worries am describing past SH and excuse, I'm okay.

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Tell everyone trapped my arm in a blender
Truth doesn't matter, wasn't a life ender
Hold a tea towel for pressure, hide the bleeding
Dead emotions they wake up screaming

Peel back the towel, see the blood congealing
Body's quicker than the mind for healing
Until the day you sail too close to the edge
Cut too deep, walk too close to the ledge

It's hard to see when the line was drawn
Was it life experience or just being born?
Either way seem's now it's the end
Death I say, how are you my friend?



'Never forget what you are. The rest of the world will not. Wear it like armor, and it can never be used to hurt you.'

[''There is only one thing we say to death. Not today'.']

'I wish I was the monster you think I am.'


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Old 05-01-2019, 01:28 PM   #31
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Just - wow.





I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much.


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Old 05-01-2019, 06:02 PM   #32
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Thanks Lins that means a lot <3



'Never forget what you are. The rest of the world will not. Wear it like armor, and it can never be used to hurt you.'

[''There is only one thing we say to death. Not today'.']

'I wish I was the monster you think I am.'


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Old 05-01-2019, 06:04 PM   #33
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I like all your stuff. You do rhyming well, sometimes rhyming can seem forced but yours really flows.





I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much.


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Old 05-01-2019, 06:15 PM   #34
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Thankyou that means a lot, especially coming from you as I very much respect your opinion.



'Never forget what you are. The rest of the world will not. Wear it like armor, and it can never be used to hurt you.'

[''There is only one thing we say to death. Not today'.']

'I wish I was the monster you think I am.'


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Old 23-04-2019, 05:36 AM   #35
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Tell the truth you say
But I can see in your eyes
What you really want is for me to tell lies

Protect the family from the hurt he caused
It is no one's responsibility except yours
Zip your lip keep it together
Hide your fear no matter the weather

I love my family but it has to come out
See if they still come first no matter how loud I shout
I'm here I matter and he did the crime
So why is the guilt not on him, it has to be mine



'Never forget what you are. The rest of the world will not. Wear it like armor, and it can never be used to hurt you.'

[''There is only one thing we say to death. Not today'.']

'I wish I was the monster you think I am.'


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Old 24-04-2019, 04:02 AM   #36
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Wish i could write as well as you <3

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Old 24-04-2019, 06:39 AM   #37
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You do, we just have different styles :)



'Never forget what you are. The rest of the world will not. Wear it like armor, and it can never be used to hurt you.'

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'I wish I was the monster you think I am.'


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Old 25-04-2019, 03:30 PM   #38
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<3 <3 <3





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