The title's shitty at the moment and may very well change but be patient with me
Anyways, this is my latest creation. It's been bubbling around in my brain for the past few days and it's finally here for ye all to see, despite how crappy it may appear to be
Please be nice =)
xx
Last edited by Zedebee : 22-11-2008 at 04:58 PM.
The only time you will find real light is when you're searching in the dark..
you're a great writer. don't keep putting yourself down. I can't wait to read more.
Don't be fooled by my smooth skin. The deepest scars are the ones unseen.
Remember compliments you received, forget the insults. If you succeed in doing this, tell me how..~ Baz Lurhman.
Letting it get to you - You know what that's called? Being alive. Best thing there is. Being alive right now that's all that counts. ~ Doctor Who "The Doctors Wife" 06.November.2011
*hugs ye both*
I appreciate your cooments. I'm just feeling slightly weird about bringng the whole Asian muslim culture into writing...it's not exat;y intersting/what people want to read....but I'll keep doing it 'cause I have nothing better to do
The only time you will find real light is when you're searching in the dark..
it's holding my interest. I know what i don't like and it's not this.
Don't be fooled by my smooth skin. The deepest scars are the ones unseen.
Remember compliments you received, forget the insults. If you succeed in doing this, tell me how..~ Baz Lurhman.
Letting it get to you - You know what that's called? Being alive. Best thing there is. Being alive right now that's all that counts. ~ Doctor Who "The Doctors Wife" 06.November.2011
a brillient piece of writing. You have some good talent there.
Don't be fooled by my smooth skin. The deepest scars are the ones unseen.
Remember compliments you received, forget the insults. If you succeed in doing this, tell me how..~ Baz Lurhman.
Letting it get to you - You know what that's called? Being alive. Best thing there is. Being alive right now that's all that counts. ~ Doctor Who "The Doctors Wife" 06.November.2011
Thank you all =) My computer's being an arse and keeps restarting itself and whatever, leaving me with missing bits of work. I keep savig as much as I can but it can't all always be saved so I have to start from scratch *grumbles*
So, pointless ramble over, here's the next tiny part that was supposed to be longer but now I'm too pissed off with my computer...
Last edited by Zedebee : 22-11-2008 at 04:59 PM.
The only time you will find real light is when you're searching in the dark..
Don't be fooled by my smooth skin. The deepest scars are the ones unseen.
Remember compliments you received, forget the insults. If you succeed in doing this, tell me how..~ Baz Lurhman.
Letting it get to you - You know what that's called? Being alive. Best thing there is. Being alive right now that's all that counts. ~ Doctor Who "The Doctors Wife" 06.November.2011
I read it all. And want more. Not in a demanding manner.
You write really well.
It's interseting. And goooood!!
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This is brilliant.
Oh, and I like reading about other cultures etc so it's definitely not something I don't want to read.
Keep going, when your pc lets you!