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Old 07-01-2012, 10:35 PM   #1
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Reviews Requested- Contains upsetting material - Place for posting poems

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Fury
I rip out pages
The first, from ages ago
Tear up the paper
Slow, so slow, drifting
To the floor, a small breeze
Lifting them up
Like snow, they settle
I light a flame
Watch them burn, bright
Paper to ashes

That evening, I weep for lost words


It's metaphorical, but I can't be bothered to go into that right now.
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Old 07-01-2012, 10:43 PM   #2
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Hey, I really enjoyed your poem. I write poetry, too, quite often. Your poetry is beautiful and visual.

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Old 08-01-2012, 12:28 AM   #3
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I like it. its good.


Last edited by Biba : 08-01-2012 at 01:03 AM.


I looove to laugh.. laughter is a direct route to the soul it broadens your perspective, keeps you healthy, and makes an unbearable situation easier to deal with .. the world is brighter when we smile.

Laughter is a direct route to the soul. It broadens your perspective, keeps you healthy, and makes an unbearable situation alot easier to deal with.

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