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Old 11-04-2012, 08:51 AM   #1
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A constant battle...
 
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Personal Piece- Contains upsetting material - A Constant Battle.

A poem I posted on AllPoetry last week...I wrote it during one of my darkest moments. I hope it's okay.

The cold, sharp knife effortlessly glides over the expanse of skin.
Red rubies blossom, and then drip smoothly down a pale white canvas.
Beautiful skin. Marred. Scarred.
The blade of an angel.
The skin of a virgin.

The battered heart of a soldier, fighting life itself.
The comfort of pain soothes.
The ecstasy of raw blood sings.

A masochistic flash of teeth
As a heartbroken smile adorns the features.
The blade does it's job.

The girl, who feels so lost in the world,
is now reminded.

Life goes on.

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Old 13-04-2012, 04:00 PM   #2
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I love the descriptive detail.
"The ecstasy of raw blood sings." Brilliant line.
I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

And, I'm here if you ever need someone to talk to.<3



It's never too late

Think happy thoughts
Think happy thoughts
Think happy thoughts
Think ha... wooo!


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