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Old 26-09-2016, 07:03 PM   #1
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Scribbles and scrawls {and other poems..}

Coal.

Smudge. On goes the coal, plastering each eyelid black.
I didnít get any eyeshadow you see. Last Christmas I was bad.
As I munch my sandwiches I reflect on what I did, and pick the charcoal from
between my teeth.
I shrug as I do so, Iíll only brush them later with
the same stuff.
But yes, bad. (What did I do again?)
Locking the door is tricky though, as the key crumbles into the hole.
The look on the bus driverís face, as his nose crinkles at the little black lump
Iíve pushed into his hand.
Geez, I just want to go to town.
Forgetting myself, I sit next to one of the good people. My music seems a bit quiet,
so avoiding conversation I cram my
black,
uncomfortable
headphones a little further into my ears.
Maybe the battery has run out on my phone.
Or maybe Iím so bad I donít deserve music.
Either way,
this is my stop.



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I am raw meat in a slaughter house, packaged according to what you are hungry for . . .


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Old 27-09-2016, 06:28 PM   #2
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wow!

I really like this and i can relate to some of the lines.....very well written. Very visual

Thanks

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Old 27-09-2016, 10:15 PM   #3
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Thanks for your kind words, postoffice :)



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Old 01-10-2016, 08:45 PM   #4
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your very welcome....you have a really strong sense of words and there is alot to what you wrote....well done

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Old 19-10-2016, 03:42 AM   #5
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This is really interesting..Like it is pulling me along that journey. I like.

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Old 21-10-2016, 03:24 PM   #6
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Thanks Rug - means a lot :)



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