Reviews Requested- Contains upsetting material - "iNSaNiTY" (My Version)

[LizzieRose]

Since "iNSaNiTY" by matt9five (feat. Miki and KAITO) is originally in Japanese. I tried to write my own English version based on translations I've seen. Here it is...

The useless purpose of,
My little sad soul,
From birth to death.
Now, it's disappearing...

Can't remember anyone,
From outside this,
Dark and blinding madness!
Good bye, my love...

Hello, myself!
How are you doing?
I swear I've seen,
You before now...

Good bye, yourself...
Are you still alive?
So do you want to tell me,
What's on your mind?

iNSaNiTY makes me feel like I am flying!
PSYCHoPaTHY, I don't care if you die!
iNSaNiTY, I can only see illusions!
CaPTiViTY, I can't escape my own mind!

iNSaNiTY makes me feel like I am flying!
PSYCHoPaTHY, I don't care if you die!
iNSaNiTY, I can only see illusions!
CaPTiViTY, my mind is being corrupted still...

The effects of these pills,
Are beginning to stop.
Outlines of reality,
Are fading to black.

Inside of my dark mind,
There cannot be light born,
With this madness.
Good bye, future.

Hello, myself!
How are you doing?
I swear I've seen,
You before now...

Good bye, yourself...
Are you still alive?
So do you want to tell me,
What's on your mind?

iNSaNiTY makes me feel like I am flying!
PSYCHoPaTHY, I don't care if you die!
iNSaNiTY, I can only see illusions!
CaPTiViTY, I can't escape my own mind!

iNSaNiTY makes me feel like I am flying!
PSYCHoPaTHY, I don't care if you die!
iNSaNiTY, I can only see illusions!
CaPTiViTY, my mind is being corrupted still...

Hey,
Haven't I seen you somewhere,
Before?

Hey,
I think you mean something to me.
Please speak.

Hey,
How long have we been here,
Cause I do not know!

Hey,
I wish we could erase memories,
Easily.

iNSaNiTY makes me feel like I am flying!
PSYCHoPaTHY, I don't care if you die!
iNSaNiTY, are we in dark or light?
iNSaNiTY, iNSaNiTY...

SaNiTY, I can see no darkness!
PuRiTY, My days are endless now!
SaNiTY, My Hell is bringing me back!
SaNiTY, What does it mean for me?

iNSaNiTY makes me feel like I am flying!
PSYCHoPaTHY, I don't care if you die!
iNSaNiTY, I can only see illusions!
CaPTiViTY, I can't escape my own mind!

iNSaNiTY makes me feel like I am flying!
PSYCHoPaTHY, I don't care if you die!
iNSaNiTY, I can only see illusions!
CaPTiViTY, my mind is being corrupted still...

iNSaNiTY!
PSYCHoPaTHY!
iNSaNiTY!
CaPTiViTY!

Color coded for the way I'd like it to go if I ever make a cover.
Magenta is the girl.
Blue is the boy.
Purple is duet.

Wish I could find a boy...

[Louise]

really like it. x

[LizzieRose]

Thank you. *smiles a little*

[Kittyboo]

Ah iNSaNiTy...so many memories with this song lol. I still prefer the original for personal reasons, but your interpretation was nice.

[Bellatrix]

How come some letters are capitalized and some aren't? *confused*

[LizzieRose]

It's just something people do with this song. I believe it originated with the creator's own titling of it, but I couldn't be sure.

[LizzieRose]

And Kitty, I like the original, too, but I'd really like to cover this song and I'm not an expert at getting Japanese lyrics quickly, so I opted for rewriting it instead. I may do ANOTHER rewrite to make it even better.