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Old 18-10-2016, 02:45 PM   #1
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god awful red
and ending up thirsty
things i left un said
make my head dirty

early little drops
and blood is dying
thirty stringy knots
my mind keep crying

but im coming back
between words stolen
tear my way to black
tears are so swollen

cut this waiting line
smoke my throat sore
waitings only time
cuttings slightly more

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Old 19-10-2016, 03:00 AM   #2
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I really like relapse poem and cut. When I can focus better I will read more but very nice. You choose stark and blunt words and punch em out at us.

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