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Old 18-12-2007, 07:26 AM   #1
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Possibly Triggering - "Cope" Poem

Just a poem I wrote about the worries of trusting somebody with everything you have.
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Will you always take my side? Will you always take my hand?
If I chose let you in, would you really understand?
I know you say you would, But I'm not sure at all.
I could tell you things that would make your skin crawl.
I would make you sick if you could hear inside my head.
I could break your heart with the things I haven't said.
I am someone complex and my mind is something dark.
I'm as mysterious as moonlight shining silver in the park.
My heart is full of venom, I have poison in my veins.
I don't want to be seen crying, so I am thankful for the rain.
I think promises are useless when they are laced with lies.
I am haunted by my past, you can see it in my eyes.
Anything that's positive turns to pain in a flash.
I am something worthless, And my kisses taste like ash.
If I let you in, could you really give me hope?
I am sorry honey, but I don't think you could cope.





"I promise that I shall never give up,
and that I'll die yelling and laughing"

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Old 18-12-2007, 08:48 AM   #2
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Oh wow, that's really really good. I have felt that that before too, like I shouldn't let people get close to me because they wouldn't be able to handle it and they would just get hurt.

Keep writing!



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Old 18-12-2007, 09:16 AM   #3
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Really like it. x
[Sorry for the lack of construction to this sentence...I just really like it]



"Be nice. Think happy thoughts. Champion silver linings. Love all things (not just cute things like babies and kittens) & when you do love - love like they do in power ballads (you know like on a cliff with the wind in your hair and your eyes shut, knowing you'll never know love like this). Watch out for dog poo. Smile at people - even grumpy ones. Remember anything is possible & whatever you do always try to look on the bright side."

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Old 18-12-2007, 10:23 AM   #4
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amazing!!
really like it!

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Old 18-12-2007, 02:59 PM   #5
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I love it. I can really relate. It's like you were inside my head and unjumbled up my words. I clearly can't speak properly.
Well done =)




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Old 19-12-2007, 01:19 PM   #6
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Wow it's a really good poem *hugs*





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and never lose hope;
remember, even when this world throws its worst and then turns its back,
there is still always hope.”


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Old 19-12-2007, 05:19 PM   #7
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I think you've been reading my mind because I'm struggling with the same thing. You have a way with words!



why would you help clean me up if i'm the mess you never made?

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Old 20-12-2007, 01:39 PM   #8
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wonderfully touching. the emotion is so raw and sad, it really stirrs the heart.



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Letting it get to you - You know what that's called? Being alive. Best thing there is. Being alive right now that's all that counts. ~ Doctor Who "The Doctors Wife"
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Old 22-12-2007, 06:43 PM   #9
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i really like this poem, i have also been in this situation too!
keep writing :)
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