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Old 26-05-2010, 09:09 PM   #1
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Possibly Triggering - endless whisper(short story )

Chapter 1

* Tanners Pov *

My dad looks at me with hate..I see it ..I see the disppointment in his eyes , he notices the sores on my face..the bruised eye..the bruise on my shoulder a nail marks on my arm..he questions them.

I lie

" I and a friend had a wreslting match , he won "

he seems cautious but drops it for now.

I cant tell him the truth..it pains me to even think it now.

* pov ends *

Tanner wakes in the morning to his radio going off , and tosses on a black musle shirt and loose jeans and boots, heads downstairs ..he grabs a glass of milk and sits at the bar in the kitchen , his dad walks in .

Jake glances at his son " mornin , Kiddo "
Tanner yawns " Morning , dad..."
Jake gets a cup of coffee " everything okay , you seemed angry last night ? "
Tanner sighs " I am fine , dad...just was deep in thought and startled is all "
Jake sits on the counter " startled ? i only tapped your shoulder ..Tanner ,is something going on i should know ? "
Tanner shakes head " No,nothing is going on dad.."
Jake curious " What about the bruises and the nightmares you have at night waking in a cold sweat ? "
Tanner sighs " scary movies dad , and me and mike just rough around..nothing serious.."
Jake cautious " how is your friendship with , John ? "
Tanner sets his empty glass down " Fine ,dad " tenses abit
Jake nods " Okay , well I am going to be home late tonight..okay..i want you to study before any friends come over okay ? "
Tanner nods " yea dad.."

the two leave in the same car , Jake dropping off Tanner at school and then Jake heads to his work.

Tanner takes in a deep breath and lets it out heading into the rowdy school , heading to his locker opening it finding a note from John's dad..he sighs opening it.

- note -
Dear , Tanner

I missed you last night , where were you ?

hope to see you tonight..

Branden

- note ends -

he sighs crumbling it up placing it back in his locker taking out his text books and note books and heads to his homeroom, which is study hall.

As he walks to the library deep in thought , John runs beside him tapping his shoulder.

John smiles " Hey.."
Tanner freezes but relaxs " dont do that, you know i hate it when people sneak up on me , John.."
John sighs " Sorry , anywhom did you get my dad's note ? "
Tanner sighs " yea..i got to study then you come over tonight .."
John makes noise " nah..your house is like boring ..my house is funnier.."
Tanner glances at John " please , John..my house tonight.."
John sighs " I'll see what i can do.."

John heads to his math class , and Tanner reachs the library for study hall.

(end chap 1 )



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Old 27-05-2010, 05:25 PM   #2
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Chapter 2

the school bell rang ,students filled the halls getting their items to head home on the bus's..and Tanner waits outside for his dad.

John smiles " Guess what ? "
Tanner scans the parking lot " What ? "
John giggles " Dad and i are coming over to your house instead of you coming to mine "
Tanner eyes wide " Wh..What..Wh..Why ? "
John sits " To make us dinner of course.."
Tanner glances down " yea...okay...forgot dad is working late tonight "
John places his bag on his lap " Dad is picking me up today , we can give you a lift if you like ? "
Tanner sighs " okay.."

once John's dad arrives the two get in the car and tanner stares out the window avoiding eye contact with John's dad.

branden glances in the mirror " Hey , Tanner...is everything okay ? "
Tanner shrugs " Yeah.."
Branden sighs " something is bothering you..."
Tanner swallows " Its nothing.."
Branden shakes head " well , I'm making hot dogs tonight...your welcome to come over anything..you need to get away from your house "
Tanner sighs " I'm fine , thanks " he glances at John with a minor glare

The rest of the drive home is in silence.

Tanner's other personality " You know , he likes you more then a son...he hurts you...you know it .."
Tanner whispers " he doesnt.."
Thanner chuckles " yes he does, why do you think he does nice things for you.."
Tanner sighs " He cares.."
Thanner laughs " yeah right , look at the way he talks to you..the way he treats you.."
Tanner glances out the window " He cares , dad doesnt.."
John taps tanner " Hey , you okay ? "
Tanner nods " Yea..thinking out loud.."

They pull into John's drive way and Tanner walks next door to his house and gets inside.

Tanner mad " I hate you , Thanner "
Thanner Laughs " You need.. me "
Tanner yells " leave me alone! "

Tanner curls up on the couch with a bottle of vodka , drinking it to shut up thanner.

Thanner laughs " it doesnt work anymore..."
Tanner drunk " shut up ..shut up "

He keeps drinking , till he runs to the bathroom puking after an hour of non stop drinking. John knocks on the door.

John calmly " Tanner ? you home ? "

Tanner places the bottle in his hiding spot and sprays his axe over him and sprays his mouth with a mint spray and answers the door.

Tanner leans against the doorway " Hey, John...sup ? "
John sighs " Your drunk again, come on..lets go to my house.."
Tanner laughs drunkly " no..i stay here..."
John sighs " I dont want to..Tanner ..you need help.."
Tanner steps back " No I dont.." shuts the door locking it

He heads upstairs after getting another bottle of vodka and reachs his room , sitting in his chair turning on the song " summers lost by Hurt " and places it on repeat and drinks ignoreing the door bell.

John gets inside his house " DAD! ..DAD! "
Branden comes out of the kitchen " What it is , John ? "
John out of the breath " Tanner ..he is drunk..again and .."
Branden nods " I'll help out .."

Branden runs out of the house to Tanner's house , using the spare key Jake gave him and runs upstairs to Tanner's room which is locked and music blasting from the room.

Thanner grins staring at Tanner " You'll never get rid of me.."
Tanner takes a swig " Oh yes i will..."

he stares at Thanner who is another reflection of him , except 9 years old.

Branden shouting " Tanner , Open the door ! "
Thanner staring at Tanner " so ? what is your plan , you freak..you useless little puny failure.."
Tanner drunkly laughs " anything to shut u up "
branden pounding and shouting " Open up , tanner ! "

Tanner takes out the case he stole from his father and opens it.

The following content has been hidden - Reason : triggering Suicide
he opens it revealing a gun a 45. pistol and stares at the black gun he sits in his chair..feeling the oily surface the icy coldness to it...

Tanner chuckles drunkly " I'll shut you up for good .."

Just as he places it in his mouth , the oil and coldness feel welcoming calling him to do it..

Thanner smirks " Do it ..it prove to your dad you failed at everything ..you know even god doesnt want you , nor does the devil "

Just as tanner places his finger on the trigger Branden breaks down the door and tackles , Tanner over powering him and tosses the gun aside.


Branden holds tanner down " Tanner , you need help...I am not going to hurt you in the way you think..I see the way you act around me , like I am going to do something wrong..but I am not.."
Tanner struggles against branden " GET OFF ME!..You..You..Rapest.."
Branden crosses tanners arms over his own chest " I never did , tanner ..someone else hurt you.."

Branden carries tanner out of his house to his own, Tanner passed out from being drunk.

John worried " I..Is he okay ? "
Branden sighs " for now , but our fears are true..he has been abuse..by whom i dont know.."
John sighs " you can take him to my room.."

Branden does so , placing him in the bed leaving the room.

John sits talking it over with his dad of what to do.

(end chap 2 )



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Old 28-05-2010, 05:51 PM   #3
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Chap 3

Tanner woke the next day late in the after noon , with a minor headach as he slept most of it off. He got out of bed and tossed on his sleep shorts John brought from his house and he didnt care for a shirt , he walked downstairs groggy and sluggish.

John finishs putting food away " afternoon , Tanner "
Tanner groggy " hey , what time is it ? "
John glances at the clock " it s 1:30 in the noon "
Tanner sits at the table " what day is it "
John " its the day after yesterday.."

Tanner nods , and Branden walks in the kitchen nearly dropping the news paper . He notices bruises some yellowing and some fresh are along his back and hand grip prints on his upper arms.

Branden sits with the paper " Hey, Tanner.."
Tanner yawns " Hi."
Branden sighs " How'd you get the bruises ? "
Tanner tenses " roughin around with John.."
John sighs " No , Tanner we never roughed around..be honest..we're not here to judge but to help "
Tanner grips the table " my dad " his voice barely a whisper

Branden nearly jumped to his feet but instead set the paper down his face tense with anger.

Branden composed " how long ? "
Tanner sighs " Since i was 6 but was sexually abused by a neighbor when i was 9.."

branden stands hugging tanner " its gonna be okay..."

(end chap 3 )



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Old 31-05-2010, 10:41 PM   #4
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This is good. Would like to read more. Hope your okay xx



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alone lonely, i'll overdose slowly
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Old 01-06-2010, 06:26 PM   #5
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Chapter 4

Tanner's father tries to calm his anger as he goes to collect his son , from John's house.

Branden answers the door " yes , Jake " blocking the way in
Jake clears his throat " I am here to pick up my son "
Branden remains calm " I am afraid i cant do that , Jake...I am sorry but its for the best.."
Jake shaking " He is my son , Branden..you cant keep him from me "
Branden clenchs his jaw " I may not but the police can..." shuts the door

two cop cars pull up outside of Branden's house and one tackles Jake who tries to run away and they cuff him and place him in the back of the patrol car and drive away.

Tanner staring out the window " was it over acting to have him arrested ?"
John glances at Tanner " yes , Child abuse of this act is illegal...Tanner.."
Tanner glances down " Why ? "
Branden sits " Cause it effects you mentally and its also hurts you ..and its not healthy , Tanner...Its okay...the judge apointed me custody of you for now.."
Tanner glances down " Am i in trouble then ? "
Branden shakes head " No, what you dad did was wrong..."

Tanner hugs himself sobbing into his knee's.

John hands him a tissue box " Its okay , to cry..."
Tanner sobbing " i..I'm scared.."

Branden pats Tanner softly on the shoulder , and they sit with him as he lets it out , afraid he might break down.

(end chap 4)



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Old 01-06-2010, 09:16 PM   #6
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Old 02-06-2010, 04:24 AM   #7
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Chapter 5

Tanner spent the next few days in his room for rent as he puts it , with the lights off and the door locked , and one cd has been playing non stop for those 3 days.

Jetta knocks softly " Tanner , hun ? "

He ignores , not even familar with his moms voice anymore.

Jetta muffled now " how long , has it been going on ? "
Branden muffled " he claims since he was 9 or 10 "
Jetta muffled sigh " I should of gotten the custody of him , not his father.."
Branden muffled " its not your fault you didnt know , plus you were recovering yourself .."
Jetta sighs " your right , thank you for contacting me , Branden.."

Tanner standing in the hall.

Jetta glances at tanner " Tanner.."
Tanner blankly " I...am..dead..."
Jetta goes to Tanner " no your not..."

He stands there blankly, as his mother holds him ..he mentally flinchs to her touch but allows it.

and He goes home with his mom , as branden knew he would be safe with his mother Jetta.

Over the next few weeks , Tanner did his normal activities , going to school , doing homework ..therapy to cope with the abuse he dealt with his father and neighbor.

Tanner has been making it hard for anyone to talk to him , he morely stays slightly silent ..and to himself , though no one knew he was even thinking and plotting his next move.

The following content has been hidden - Reason : triggering suicide
he sat on his bed in his unlocked bedroom a bottle of pills infront of him , he started at it he had fought several years from giving into its call , but he pours the half bottle into his hand and pops them bit at a time and swallows and plays the song " adam's song by blink 182 "


an hour later the effects pull him into the tempting sleep , as his mom arrives home 30 minutes later has he falls into the deep black dreamless sleep..as sound distorts around him into unknown sounds, his mom checks on his to find him unconcious a pill bottle beside him and instantly calls 911..and knows the reason behind his attempt.

he is rushed to the E.R and pumped charcoal to counter act the effects of the medciation he took.

Jetta is in the waiting room sobbing , as Branden arrives and she tells him what happened and why, He sat beside her waiting with her .

(end chap 5)



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I like this, would be interested in reading more



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Old 08-06-2010, 05:12 PM   #9
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Chapter 6

Jetta is called back to speak with the doctor and on site psych social worker , leaving Jetta nervous about her son's well being.

P.S.C calmly " I am , Jen..I've spoken with your son..and I feel best if he got psychicatric care for a week or two. "
Jetta swallows " w..What is wrong with him ? "
Jen reassuring " its nothing to serious , but he suffers from Post traumatic stress disorder , depression and danger to self.."
Jetta confused " Danger to himself ? "
Jen nods " He has cuts on his legs.."
Jetta eyes wide " m..My son is doing this ? "
Jen nods " and he also ..has a drinking problem "

this news about the heavy drinking her son does , even stuns her..and that to keep him from withdrawl they'll have to at the most give him some form of alcohol..to keep him from sever withdrawl symptoms .

Jetta understands " I..I'll sign the papers...I want my son happy..not hurting "
Jen reassuring " its gonna be okay , nothing bad is going to happen to him , while in the care of the adolscent ward."

Jetta nods filling out the papers.

(end chap 6 )



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