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18-12-2007, 07:26 AM
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Imperfect
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Scotland
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Possibly Triggering - "Cope" Poem
Just a poem I wrote about the worries of trusting somebody with everything you have.
Xoxo
Will you always take my side? Will you always take my hand?
If I chose let you in, would you really understand?
I know you say you would, But I'm not sure at all.
I could tell you things that would make your skin crawl.
I would make you sick if you could hear inside my head.
I could break your heart with the things I haven't said.
I am someone complex and my mind is something dark.
I'm as mysterious as moonlight shining silver in the park.
My heart is full of venom, I have poison in my veins.
I don't want to be seen crying, so I am thankful for the rain.
I think promises are useless when they are laced with lies.
I am haunted by my past, you can see it in my eyes.
Anything that's positive turns to pain in a flash.
I am something worthless, And my kisses taste like ash.
If I let you in, could you really give me hope?
I am sorry honey, but I don't think you could cope.
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"I promise that I shall never give up,
and that I'll die yelling and laughing"
- Jack Kerouac
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18-12-2007, 08:48 AM
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-invictus-
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Maryland, USA
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Oh wow, that's really really good. I have felt that that before too, like I shouldn't let people get close to me because they wouldn't be able to handle it and they would just get hurt.
Keep writing!
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Laura
"I have found the paradox, that if you love until it hurts, there can be no more hurt, only more love." ~Mother Theresa
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18-12-2007, 09:16 AM
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Forum Mod.
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Really like it. x
[Sorry for the lack of construction to this sentence...I just really like it]
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"Be nice. Think happy thoughts. Champion silver linings. Love all things (not just cute things like babies and kittens) & when you do love - love like they do in power ballads (you know like on a cliff with the wind in your hair and your eyes shut, knowing you'll never know love like this). Watch out for dog poo. Smile at people - even grumpy ones. Remember anything is possible & whatever you do always try to look on the bright side."
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18-12-2007, 10:23 AM
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There's nothing here in this heart left to borrow!
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amazing!!
really like it!
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19-12-2007, 01:19 PM
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A Ray of Hope
Join Date: Jun 2007
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Wow it's a really good poem *hugs*
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“Never lose faith in yourself,
and never lose hope;
remember, even when this world throws its worst and then turns its back,
there is still always hope.”
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19-12-2007, 05:19 PM
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don't look at me in that tone of voice
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Western U.S.
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I think you've been reading my mind because I'm struggling with the same thing. You have a way with words!
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why would you help clean me up if i'm the mess you never made?
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20-12-2007, 01:39 PM
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I am a leaf on the wind; watch how I soar
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Somewhere, but I'm not really sure
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wonderfully touching. the emotion is so raw and sad, it really stirrs the heart.
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Don't be fooled by my smooth skin. The deepest scars are the ones unseen.
Remember compliments you received, forget the insults. If you succeed in doing this, tell me how..~ Baz Lurhman.
Letting it get to you - You know what that's called? Being alive. Best thing there is. Being alive right now that's all that counts. ~ Doctor Who "The Doctors Wife"
06.November.2011
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22-12-2007, 06:43 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Canada
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i really like this poem, i have also been in this situation too!
keep writing :)
xXx
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