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Old 19-03-2017, 10:24 PM   #1
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random thoughts /poetry

Every Step

With every inch I gain
I fall three steps behind
Everything’s in vain
I’m always walking blind

I breathe but I also drown
I jump but I tumble and fall
I get up but sink back down
I'm free but surrounded by a wall
I love but I get left behind
I hate but I hate me more inside

Every step I take is killing me
I’m walking through mud

Every step I take is breaking me
Back bowed, face down

I struggle and crawl
…on my knees
(Where I belong)
Begging for (more) this to end




okay, so this is just one of many Poems I hurriedly write down. Originally the phrases in brackets were crossed out, but I can't see how to do it here.... And again, have mercy, I'm not a native speaker and also not living in an english speaking country



I breathe but I also drown
I jump but I tumble and fall
I get up but sink back down
I'm free but surrounded by a wall
I love but I get left behind
I hate but I hate me more inside

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Old 28-03-2017, 11:54 AM   #2
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I really love the contrast and contradiction in this. Well written :)

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Soon... Now will be then...Today will be yesterday... Present will be past...And thought will be memory... So...Live for the future! Make your future how you want it!

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