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Old 29-09-2014, 05:54 PM   #1
JokerJill
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Personal Piece- Contains upsetting material - Fallen Rose Petals

Given the rose of passion
Love everlasting
Didn't know it would happen in this fashion
Heart surpassing
As the petals fall on the ground
I feel my heart shake
It gives a pound
And a horrid quake
I feel a crack
I do not listen
Then I feel impact
My tears run down and glisten
The rose slips from my hand
Falling as the petals scatter
Across the stone cold sand
I feel my heart shatter
As I realize you're gone
Now I must try to push on



Be happy, don't worry

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Old 07-10-2014, 09:47 AM   #2
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I love the imagery in this, really good description.



'Never forget what you are. The rest of the world will not. Wear it like armor, and it can never be used to hurt you.'

['There is only one thing we say to death. Not today'.']

'We are each our own devil, and we make this world our hell.’ – Oscar Wilde
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Old 29-10-2014, 06:15 AM   #3
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Beautiful!

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Given the rose of passion
Love everlasting
Didn't know it would happen in this fashion
Heart surpassing
As the petals fall on the ground
I feel my heart shake
It gives a pound
And a horrid quake
I feel a crack
I do not listen
Then I feel impact
My tears run down and glisten
The rose slips from my hand
Falling as the petals scatter
Across the stone cold sand
I feel my heart shatter
As I realize you're gone
Now I must try to push on
It's so touching!

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Old 29-10-2014, 06:59 AM   #4
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This is beautiful :)



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