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Old 16-02-2014, 02:31 AM   #1
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Personal Piece - Safe - Love Is

Love is a curious figure,
with the wonders and plunders it brings,
with a flitter and flutter,
the knife cuts like butter,
and makes the heart bleed while it sings.

Love is an ominous creature,
alive in it's very own way,
it makes butterflies cry
as they soar in the sky,
and it makes liars mean what they say.

Love is a dangerous being,
as pleasant as it may be,
it makes the largest ones small,
and the minuscule tall,
and the blind ones can finally see.

Love is a siren; a demon,
who uses it's positive sides
to capture and kill,
and destroy someone's will,
and rip holes in the fabric of pride.

Love is an interesting concept,
a true enigma from within,
for a daughter and dad,
or a love they won't have,
it's a difficult battle to win.

Love is an analyzed subject,
that drives many great thinkers to tears,
when their new emotion
breaks through; overcomes them,
but remains unsolved though all these years.

Love is a desolate wasteland,
filled with heavenly fragments of peace,
that traps two poor souls
and devours them whole,
and refuses to consider release.

Love is a curious figure,
with a light and a dark point of view,
but it keeps some insane,
and the others, the same,
and the lucky ones can become new.


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Old 21-02-2014, 08:07 PM   #2
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That was really really good! Truly the best thing I've read on this site. But I was expecting something at the end about how love is not very loving or that love is the hatred within or something like that. I'm not saying it's wrong that it didn't have that in it, I'm just saying that that's what I as a reader was expecting.



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Old 02-03-2014, 10:01 PM   #3
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youre a wonderful poet





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Old 30-03-2014, 04:50 AM   #4
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Thank you so much! Both of you just made my day :) And I meant to leave that part out of it, solely because love isn't what someone expects, just as it wasn't expected from you that I would leave that point out :P It is true though!

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