grats for being 2 years clean. i've never really tried to struggle to get clean from anything (i tend to stop and restart things out of the blue) so i don't have much input on that, but it was still good to read your shared experience.
the poem is fine, all poems are self-expression. technical skill is something you can pick up just by reading and writing a lot of them, but it's not that important. you have a good beat to your poem— something i'm still complete garbage at despite how much i've written. you could read this poem aloud and it would still be good, but i tend to write in a way where it's better on paper lol
anyways keep it up~