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Abintra · 18-04-2012, 08:32 AM

i like your work you have a way of painting a picture in the readers mind, i personally would change the format of your writing (more so for the first one) how ever it was well written

18-04-2012, 08:32 AM	#4
Abintra This Member is currently Banned Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: your mum I am currently:	i like your work you have a way of painting a picture in the readers mind, i personally would change the format of your writing (more so for the first one) how ever it was well written
	To whom I may offend, hahahahaha Yours faithfully the monkeys arse