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Old 03-12-2014, 12:16 AM   #12
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For your most recent poem, I absolutely loved the last stanza. But I have a suggestion for your second line if that's okay?
I'm not sure that glooming is the best fit. Maybe something like "I don't think I'll get past the hurt that is looming."?



"No matter how hard it gets, you push through it because you matter. And before you know it, you see the beauty in life and you realize that it is worth living. That you can make it."


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