thanks! though i think i'm only decent sometimes, like if i'm really inspired or if the thing pretty much writes itself. when i actually have to think of what to write myself, it ends up quite terribly. good example is what i did just now.
12 hours ago, I saw your face:
Tears in your eyes, we fought at your place.
11 hours ago, the train
I disembarked left me in the rain.
10 hours ago, I'm at our park;
The place we met, our names carved in bark.
9 hours ago. Sitting alone
on the park bench, drenched to the bone.
8 hours ago: Walking, walking.
I don't even know where im going
7 hours ago, at a store:
buying candy, pills and hard liquor.
6 hours ago, on my way home.
Baby why wont you pick up the phone?
5 hours ago, I sent a text
From the train I'm on. My stop is next.
4 hours ago, I was yawning
As I passed my apartment's awning.
3 hours ago, you dont pick up-
so I pick up a pill, lift my cup.
2 hours ago, no response.
A call or a text is all I want.
1 hour ago, feeling sleepy;
Muddled thoughts, it's hard to think deeply.
Just now, I'm starting to regret that
I never left food out for my cat.
obviously not some kinda weird suicide note or w/e. i dont have a cat. or a relationship. or money for alcohol. :c