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Forum: Creativity and Reviews 10-02-2008, 05:41 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 526
Posted By sjhope
ugh, know that pain, feel those words, love that...

ugh, know that pain, feel those words, love that poem!
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 08-02-2008, 10:15 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 483
Posted By sjhope
Bookmark Blissful Burning

desperate to revel in your shame
drown myself within cuts that blame
an addiction I shall never tame
insanity flowing like pouring rain

such extreme highs that seem to shine
ecstasy no longer...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 05-02-2008, 05:25 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 659
Posted By sjhope
loved it, so creative and unique... you are truly...

loved it, so creative and unique... you are truly talented...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 03-02-2008, 04:58 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 484
Posted By sjhope
hey, thanks a lot, that's actually a real...

hey, thanks a lot, that's actually a real complement in my eyes...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 02-02-2008, 02:21 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 484
Posted By sjhope
Bookmark Familiar Footsteps

eyes that catch the distant look on
your face and
a heart that senses the hesitance in
your embrace

ears that note the caution in your
tone and
a soul that receives your emotive wall
of stone
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 02-02-2008, 02:13 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 507
Posted By sjhope
I agree... I agree with your view and I agree...

I agree... I agree with your view and I agree with the other reply that you're very talented... loved the poems... especially the message of the first one... so refreshing to read another kind of...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 02-02-2008, 02:04 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 459
Posted By sjhope
Bookmark Overflowing Emptiness

lonely amid crowds of friends
with hollow laughter that never ends
(the essence of light that moves and bends)

a heart that's filled with love and prayer
recoiled with emptiness so bare
(each...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 02-02-2008, 01:58 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 428
Posted By sjhope
thank you, I take the message of this poem very...

thank you, I take the message of this poem very seriously...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 29-01-2008, 12:21 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 659
Posted By sjhope
really liked this, full of honest emotion that I...

really liked this, full of honest emotion that I could truly feel... very dark but genuine and the best poetry is from the soul... your choice of words really drew me in to each line, nice job,...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 29-01-2008, 12:16 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 738
Posted By sjhope
wow! I can so identify with all of these...

wow! I can so identify with all of these segments... my favorite, though is 'chameleon' - had me to a tee... as did most... but besides the amazing connection, your poetry was just brilliant and so...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 29-01-2008, 12:03 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 650
Posted By sjhope
I would be very interested... publishing in that...

I would be very interested... publishing in that genre for myself and for others has long been a dream of mine in fact I have many ideas for different angles of which to create books... my mother is...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 26-01-2008, 08:51 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 385
Posted By sjhope
Bookmark Turning To Ash

floored, distraught and dizzy
I know there is no cure...
reeling, withdrawn and lost
searching for what's pure...

I'm crumbling into ash,
tossed as if yesterday's trash,
with trouble spreading like...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 26-01-2008, 08:43 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 428
Posted By sjhope
Bookmark Tainted Disarray

(follow all those who secretly rage
turn away as they are dark and tainted
for they will be outcast forever
they will always be dark and jaded)

ease the displaced back together
allow the broken...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 17-01-2008, 03:10 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 532
Posted By sjhope
wow, thanks so much guys :) I really appreciate...

wow, thanks so much guys :) I really appreciate hearing such nice feedback, it really gives me a pick-me-up from the mood behind the poem... thanks again... :)
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 17-01-2008, 09:27 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 791
Posted By sjhope
what an awesome and such a sweet poem!! You...

what an awesome and such a sweet poem!! You obviously have a very kind heart and as a member of RYL I want to say thank you for that poem :) and thank you in general for being the kind of person...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 17-01-2008, 09:19 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 532
Posted By sjhope
Bookmark The Hurt

feel the hurt that sits inside
as it twists and turns and squeals and writhes...
almost a living, breathing thing
as I listen to the painful song it sings...

ease the hurt that's settled...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 19-12-2007, 12:51 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 599
Posted By sjhope
ooh, really good, could you give a little...

ooh, really good, could you give a little background on it? only if you feel comfortable... very nice job... :)
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 14-12-2007, 09:50 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 583
Posted By sjhope
Bookmark The Icy Embrace

damp from the frosty layers
reeling from the cold within
lost and ashamed, alone and blamed
with restlessness upon my skin

so, embrace me with your (scars)
embrace me with your (sorrow)
for I...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 13-12-2007, 08:47 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 811
Posted By sjhope
so very beautifully artistic and poetic, poetry...

so very beautifully artistic and poetic, poetry at its finest...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 13-12-2007, 08:42 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 737
Posted By sjhope
great poem, and welcome to this forum :)

great poem, and welcome to this forum :)
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 13-12-2007, 08:39 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 770
Posted By sjhope
I am in awe, these are amazing... wow, what I...

I am in awe, these are amazing... wow, what I would give to posess your poetic ability... you are one in a million... (and I am an avid reader) please, keep posting!!!!
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 13-12-2007, 08:33 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 540
Posted By sjhope
Bookmark Turning To Ash...

floored, distraught and dizzy
I know there is no cure...
reeling, withdrawn and lost
searching for what's pure...

I'm crumbling into ash,
tossed as if yesterday's trash,
with trouble spreading like...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 05-12-2007, 01:28 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 769
Posted By sjhope
honestly, you guys, thank you so much... it feels...

honestly, you guys, thank you so much... it feels so amazing to have one's work be appreciated... :)
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 30-11-2007, 09:39 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 672
Posted By sjhope
Bookmark Dripping For More...

spinning, surrounding, out of control,
these things as they build, taking their toll

enough to have me down on the floor,
watching it flow and begging for more...

how can you blame me, the tricks...
Forum: Creativity and Reviews 30-11-2007, 09:16 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 769
Posted By sjhope
Bookmark Melancholy Sadness

somber colors, sky's a mess of grays,
melancholy sadness, inside a foggy daze,
gloomy horizon, cast over sun's rays

loss full circle, got failure on the brain,
tears are vacant, by overwhelming...
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