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DarkWhispers123 06-08-2013 03:32 AM

She and I (poem)
 
she smiles, i cry
she`s brave, i`m shy
she loves, i`m alone
she`s amazing, i`m unknown
she`s beautiful, i`m a mess
she`s happy, i`m depressed
she`s fake, i am real
my mask is perfect, she hides me.

Sooty 18-08-2013 02:25 PM

I really like that right until the end I thought you were talking about two different people but really talking about you and the mask you wear to hide how you feel inside. One thing though, if your mask is perfect then why is there so much sadness and pain still lying beneath it. Surely a perfect mask would be one that lets you shine from inside out?

Sophie.x

persephoneginger 22-08-2013 06:57 PM

Wow, really love it!


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