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Darkwings44 18-07-2019 11:14 PM

screams *short poem*
as i press the tool against my skin
i unleash the hate that bubbleing like red hot magma
i unleash the hurt and the pain that swirling black and dark like a starless night
i unleash the slielt screams just under the skin clawing their way out

one_step_closer 20-07-2019 11:42 AM

Really nice. I especially like 'swirling black and dark like a starless night.'

activebrain 21-07-2019 02:13 AM

Very descriptive. You really can tell how it makes you feel and how you are feeling prior to doing it.

Darkwings44 21-07-2019 09:45 PM

Thank you very much!!!

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